please help

I need help with card please i made this card for a sixteen year old boy but the lady didn't like it can anyone please why it doesn't work honest opinion.
love
Imelda x x

simply stylish

I made this card for a sister didnt know anything about her so i hoped this lady would suit i think the lady looks very glam and didnt need much done to her.
Love
Imelda

wedding invites

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i thought you would like to see the wedding invites i made for my friend candys nephew. Michael and nicola are to be married in sept in Italy hence why the need for the invites so soon. I must say that i am very proud of these i personally think they turned out very expensive looking but i think this has more to do with the colours rather than my work the extra bits in the pocket is the rsvp and a poem requesting money instead off a gift i spent hours searching for a peom which didnt sound rude
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imelda